Email greetings, sign-offs and subject lines
Greetings, sign-offs and subject lines are where people hesitate most. Good news: a handful of safe choices cover 95% of situations.
Greetings
- "Hi Sarah,": the safe default with colleagues, clients and managers.
- "Dear Ms Miller,": for a very formal first contact.
- "Hi all," or "Hi team,": for a group.
- Avoid "Hey" or no greeting at all, unless the relationship is very casual.
Sign-offs
- "Best regards," or "Kind regards,": neutral and always fine.
- "Thanks," or "Best,": between colleagues.
- Avoid "Cheers" in formal contexts, and "xoxo" always.
Sign with your first name (plus surname for a first contact).
Writing a good subject line
A subject line should let someone understand the email without opening it. Keep it under 10 words, name the topic and, if useful, the action or deadline.
- "Overdue: invoice INV-118 ($3,200)"
- "Quarterly report: delivery Monday morning"
- "PO-552 not delivered – needed by Friday"
Avoid "Question", "Urgent", "Quick request" or an empty subject.
Filler phrases
"I hope this email finds you well", "Just checking in", "Don't hesitate to reach out": they make emails longer and say nothing. Cut them and lead with the information.
FAQ
Is "Best regards" too formal?
No. It's the neutral default. "Best" or "Thanks" are fine with people you work with daily.
Should I use "Dear" or "Hi"?
Mirror the other person. If they write "Hi" and sign with their first name, do the same.
What's a good subject line for a follow-up email?
Name what you're following up on, with its reference: "Follow-up: quote Q-2025-07", plus the deadline if it matters.
Business email examples, annotated
- Push back a deadline
- Request a meeting
- Prepare a new starter
- Send meeting notes
- Ask for a day off
- Get a document
- Book a meeting room
- Confirm a client visit
- Request a quote
- Request access
- Move the team meeting
- Ask for feedback
- Reschedule a meeting
- Chase an expense claim
- Chase an unpaid invoice
- Say no to a colleague
- Chase a supplier
- Follow up with a prospect
- Decline a recurring meeting
- Turn down a candidate
- Turn down a discount
- Chase a colleague
- Say no to out-of-scope work
- Follow up after an interview
- Push back on your boss
- Chase a contract signature
- Decline a vendor's offer
- Remind the team
- Break bad news to a client
- Answer a furious client
- Client charged twice
- Report a budget overrun
- Report a lost client
- Own up to a mistake
- Negotiate a raise
- Negotiate a price increase
- Negotiate a deadline
- Make amends with a colleague
- After a service outage
- Push back on the CEO